Services
01.
Development Editing
Organize story, improve plot, character, pacing, voice, fact checking, and audience relevance
02.
Substantive & Line Editing
Enhance clarity, coherence, sentence flow, word choice, and overall impact
03.
Copy Edit & Proofreading
Correct grammar, spelling, punctuation, formatting, style, and eliminate minor errors.
04.
Beta Reading
Test read to give feedback from the point of view of the average reader to fix remaining issues with plot, pacing, and consistency.
05.
Writing Services
Create and research grants. Write proposals, memoirs, biographies, family histories, and professional content.
06.
Technical & Professional Editing
Edit reports, proposals, standard operating procedures, thesis, dissertations, science documents, medical documents, and engineering documents
Testimonials
"Lorrie has been a great addition to our critique group. Not only is she an excellent writer in her own right, but her concise, accurate, and kind comments are always on target. Her supportive interactions with the other writers in our group have been greatly appreciated."—Lorraine Jeffery, President of Utah Poetry Society Word Weaver: Utah County Chapter
Experience
Awards & Publications
Wick Somerset Retreat
2025
Month long writing retreat that included the Leadbury
Poetry Festival
See Me As a Writer
2020
Personal Narritive Award
Writing For Social Change
Utah Valley University
Charity of The Dead
2021
Warp & Weave V19,12
Utah Valley University
I Hope You Are Okay
2019
1st Place New Poet
Utah Poetry Society Contest
The Red Queen
2020
2nd Place Poetry
Warp & Weave,
Utah Valley University
9.13.18
2019
2nd Honorable Mention
League of Utah Writers
Quills Contest